But anyway this is my art exam I'm talking about, 5 hours ouch! This is the reason why I was asking what people thought about Egypt. But as for my final piece; it's not amazing but it could be alot worse. I'll try and get a picture of it on here ASAP but I can't be sure how long that will be. (Hey that rhymes! ^_^)
But at least I won't be at school tomorrow. Because I going to Poetry Live in Bath, which is where the poets talk about what they are trying to get across in their pieces and the feelings they're trying to convey. Kind of good timing that I have my English Lit exam the next day which is on those poems and one the best but most freaky books I've read "Lord of the Flies".
I'm really tired so I'm probably going to hit the sack in a bit. But first thing first thank you very much Mrs Nesbitt I'm really pleased that you were inspired by my little motto. I've never been one to go with the crowd unintentionally or (since secondary school) intentionally. Therefore I'm an outcast but it doesn't bother me and I stick by what I say.
Another little thing I found and it is similar to my motto. I just had an impulse to write this and to be honest I love it! Enjoy!!!
Identity
A part of me,
But a truely secret part,
Never can I reveal the true feelings of my heart.
In the mirror, myself I see,
But what I wish can never Be.
Just a face, can't be set apart,
Only the eyes, reveal trueness of heart.
But how can such a thing be seen,
If a mask is what the face has been.
Many... all wear a mask,
To show your true self is all I ask.
See the eyes, windows of the soul,
But such things are unwillingly told.
You see the world is such a mess,
Because, if you think about it, we're all...
FACELESS

4 comments:
Is that one of your own poems Tori??
Wow!
Wow!
What about....
But such things are unwhittingly told/sold?
hhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm????
Fantastic!
Can I put it on my blog?
Please?
Let me know...WOW!
What a wonderful poem - truly inspiring. Well done
its a nice poem
Tori (thats my name)
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